Tag: writing
member name: Deanna P.
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November 28, 2006 10:29 PM EST --
Do you remember when you were much younger and your parents would always say something to you, which was never true. Just to make you thing you did something wrong. heres an example.
You know how . . .
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November 26, 2006 08:57 PM EST --
I'm setting here all alone.
Don't know what to say or do.
There's things i could be doing, but don't.
why do we have to get like this.
The life of a unsatisfied mood.
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February 17, 2007 02:06 PM EST --
I 'm a very simple person.
I don't use big words
I don't know how metaphors works.
If its true or not.
I don't know how to read any intellect stories
and I couldn't . . .
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March 11, 2008 02:41 PM EDT --
They both lay in front of the fire place, the flames fight their way up the chimney and the wood cracks and pops. Its cozy and warm and with a glass of wine in each of their hands. He . . .
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December 15, 2006 09:49 PM EST --
Its so cold outside
with layers of fluffy stuff
a white bed of snow
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March 11, 2008 09:31 AM EDT --
I have a really good story that is in my head...that is dieing to come out. if you have any good advice or hints to help me write a novel. I could really use your help. Anything would help. where . . .
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May 16, 2008 12:23 PM EDT --
( Remember this is just a outline. i have tons of editing to do. just want to know what you think?)
FORBIDDEN FOREST
A young mother named Susan, with two kids, Michael and Ashley. Go to live . . .
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January 09, 2007 12:14 AM EST --
Its so colorful.
Smell! all the space around you.
Its only spring time.
The sun beating down.
Its swimming and BBQ's.
Its only summer time.
Its time to rake leaves.
The . . .
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February 10, 2007 05:23 PM EST --
I'm hear all alone.
The races are on.
So my husband is gone
My son is with his friends.
cause mom's no fun.
My daughter comes and go's,
but is gone,
more than here.
I have the . . .
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December 31, 2008 05:26 PM EST --
Every second, i breath
Every minute, i blink
Every hour, i smile
Every day, i eat
Every week, i hug
Every month, i enjoy
Every year, I have learn so much from you.
Happy New . . .
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November 17, 2006 11:20 PM EST --
My husband builds decks and porches. His building a deck for a chiefs football player right now. I ask my husband, if the football player, ever comes out and talks to them. My husband said that, . . .
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January 03, 2007 09:32 PM EST --
It was awful today.
I had it bad.
I didn't know how much more longer i could take it.
I hated it.
I missed everyone.
They keep trying to get to me
and there was no way for me to communicate. . . .
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January 05, 2007 04:30 PM EST --
My son has a reading disability. So for me to help him. I have to read all his work, before i can help him. Well he has to do a book report for his library class. He had to read a book 100 pages or more. . . .
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January 25, 2007 08:55 PM EST --
I went to the drive in often with my family. There was my dad Henry a quite man and my mom Beth a loving women, my hateful brother John and my spoiled pretty little sister sally. I was the middle . . .
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February 27, 2007 08:26 PM EST --
My mind is wondering.
How I got this far.
I'm half way thur my life
and I have learn so much.
Now i have the other half,
that will be such a journey.
I have become wise, so
can you . . .
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May 12, 2009 08:15 PM EDT --
Negitivity is around us.
It over takes us.
We are taught so much of it
That we just don't see it.
Positivity should be around us.
Its what we need.
If it's shown to . . .
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February 26, 2007 07:53 PM EST --
I can't breath,
I take a deep breath
and still cant breath.
Its all piling up,
and i don't know what to do.
She won't help me
such young sole.
Sleeps all day
and party . . .
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July 10, 2009 03:05 PM EDT --
i know the first thing to do...is have a story in your mind and you would have to really want to write.....but, what is the very first thing you do before you start your story. Do you make outlines, if . . .
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December 16, 2006 09:08 AM EST --
I'm setting here reading every ones find work, a few jokes, and a couple of games, with beautiful photos and great writing. Then all of a sudden, and its getting to were it does it all the time. I'll . . .
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July 29, 2007 06:12 PM EDT --
She taking this long path.
It's cold and lonely.
No one seems to be on it, but her.
She knows there is something at the end.
If only, she could get there.
It's a long journey and . . .
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